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The Kidnapper

On the first day of July Abby, Chester,and Macy were all on a walk around the park. It was very dark and no one was there. When they were walking a car pulled up, the window rolled down and a man said  get in your parent were in a horrible acent and asked me to pick you up. They got in the car [ no one had tolled them not to get in strangers cars] the doors locked their was no way to get out now. The man zoomed away and was out of sight. Were was this horrible acent  Macy asked  Their was no acent i'm kidnapping you I though you new that said the man. They all started to scream help!! Oh shut up you mutes the man shouted above there scrams. Were are you taking us Abby winded, he didn't anwser  hey dud, dud ,fine be that way chester groweled.

Mean wile at his secret laura he was tieing the kids up tight to a pole. You don't get no food no water i'm just going to let you suffer and die he said. He locked the gate and left. Guys we need to get out of hereMacy whispered thinking that he could hear them  this dud is sicwe Chester added.

At their house their mom was pasing back and fourth wondering were her kids were. She was very worried if they had got kidnapped or they got in big trouble. She called the police, they were one the seen of the crime looking for some clues that they got kiddnaped one of the police men saw tire tracks that led up the street. They went up the street to an abondon bilding. It was very dark in their but the tracks lead inside. They walked inside, they walked up some stairs and BAME!! A scary man jumped out, the police put their guns up and the man froze. The police called out put your hands up. They hand coved the man and put him in the back of the police car.  but wait called out Mrs. Andrews  We still need to find my kids. Then they heard screams of help coming from up stairs, they raced up stair and found the kids.

One month later,

YOU ARE PROVEN GILTY the jug shouted out  NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO the man yelled  I can not go to jail'' the man said in his mind CLANK.