Drafts+Kali

Continue with your writing peace. I want you to try to think about some ideas for your great story. Chapter 1 I had a wonderful weekend. I had a sleepover with my best of friends, Gabby. We talked about our American Girl Dolls and how we can make them like ourselves. First I won my soccer game 3to 1. My soccer game was great I was goalie in the first half. In the second half the other goalie Emily was in the goal. I was in middle field.After I picked up Gabby and went to a gaege sale she got some lovely earrings and I got a beautiful bracelet.Gabby had told me that she has not wearn earring for time so her ears were filled up with gunk in the holes were the earrings would go. We went up stiars into my dad's office were we would find out where we were sleeping. When we were finsh with that we both went into the TV room to play Mario Cart on the Wii. We did a game called Grand Prix. This game has four car race games. We shared by playing different games I played the first and the last and Gabby played the second and the third races. In most of the games we got first to fourth place. On the very last game we got second place and on my Mario dirvers linces I have a musroom on it.

Chapter 2

When my brother woke up, we went to go play put-put golf at Colorado Jorney. On the 17th hole I made it though a wagon that gets you closer to the hole. I jumped in fright because a scary vocie came out of nowhere. The voice shouted “ Come on Black Bart in jail.”exalimed the sheriff. Black Bart replied back “ Over my dead body sheriff.”, “ Okay Black Bart have it your way.” that was the last thing the sheriff. Bang Pow went the guns. “ Oh you got me” Black Bart exlaimed.The voice frighted myself, my mother, my litlle borther and Gabby too. Gabby lost one of her balls down a fast water steam and we always looked for the ball on each hole. My brother also lost his ball down a fast water steam too. This is how he did that he used his golf swing when he is hitting golf balls with my dad. I saved his ball with my put-put golf culb. I lost my ball down a hill by dropping my golf culb and the ball rolled out of my wet, slippery hand and rolled down the hill.When Gabby and I went to go grab two more golf balls so if we lost ours again. Down water or a hill we would have one extra. We had to hop on a rock to get over a steam to get the balls, my mom let my brother hit her ball in to a plastic tube on the 18th hole, we all had fun watching him put the ball in the tube.

Chapter 3

After the game we all went to the fantsic restraunt called Sweet Tomtoes a buffet place. We al had diferent food items. We all had different kinds of soups. Lastly, we all had fanstiic desserts. We had a loud, nosie, tasty dinner, at Sweet Tomatoes. When we got home Gabby, my brother, and myself played Lite Brite. We made fantsico pictures for my mom with many cool colors. When my brother fell asleep Gabbyand I went up stairs to go whatch a movie called “ Two Bits and Pepper”. We got 30 mintues though the movie and we got kindof. We got scaried because there were these crazy drivers that would stop and try to kindnap kids. But they almost got one girl to come with, but the young girl did the right thing. She throw rocks at the bad guys, and she also ran away to from the bad guys so she would not get kidnapped. Also the movie was about a horse and pony that have been best riends for a long time. Instead we whatched the movie “ UnderDog” we laughed because there were a lot of funny parts that was in the movie. Gabby fell asleep at 10:20 pm and I fell asleep at 10:25 pm. In the morning at 8:05 am we played our Nitendo DS and our Game Boy. Gabby and I switched games so each of us could playdifferent games. For breakfast we had pancakes and bacon. After breakfast were still hungry. We talked about our American Girl Dolls and we looked in the magizie that I had. We made lots of list so we could find what we want and don't want. All in all I had a great weekend.